Effervescent clarity being such a luxury
that even lost winter's dreams could not produce.
Another muse?
Amuse the falling butterfly, landing on thy nose
A tiny dancer, amongst the spring and summer dresses
Fluttering sweet warm aromas, each eye lands
on shifting sands
Repeating time, her words lingering in flowing rivers
One more shiver down the line,
a green and growing vine
flowers blossom every year, and every year entwine.
Amuse the falling butterfly, landing on thy nose
Repeating time, her words lingering in flowing rivers.
Another muse on shifting sands.
One more shiver down the line.
Entwined in every year,
a flower's valentine.
Author notes
A poem I wrote, I don't believe I've ever heard of the form I used before, so if its new please tell me so i can give it a name lol. But the poem itself, I weaved multiple meanings into, what they are, is for you to find, (^.^) the poem was intended to have multiple meanings, but its really whatever the reader wishes it to be, Oh how i love making pieces like this lol
A contest entry
- Prewrites mania!! by Xx Luna xX.
550 points, ended January 7, 2008, 26 entries
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hm...well, what do think really, an honest opinion of what you think of the poem and what you think it means.
Comments
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I didnt knw you were in this contest. Why you got to write a poem better than mine? Hope you make it past the first round to.
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Wow!!!!!!
What a wonderful write! Great job. Well done. Thank you so much for entering and good luck
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Excellent
You know this made me think of being VERY peaceful on Valentine's day...maybe alone..maybe not... but I would have said in a beach,but no, as reading that word butterfly(my third favorite animal) I thought right away of a butterfly field walking around..maybe in Costa Rica Hehe....Man you took me VERY far indeed.
Anyways,this was a really good write. I did like it indeed.
Spotlight time!
...Simply Me♥
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