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Lust

so she lusts for him
just a cover for her fear
she smiles but a moment
for a tear in eyes is real
his hand upon her flesh
she quivers and retreats
shes his only fantasy
her heart no longer beats

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  • Sam-Heartagram
    January 5, 2008

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    wow that was real good ang
    that was powerful and i cant quite figure out what you are relating to in your life. but hell, thats what poetry is all about right? great write, keep it up


  • A-Cinnamon-Spider
    January 2, 2008

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    I would like to say first off: Wow. This feels like you read my thoughts. I can relate to this very much. And second, I like your format, you broke this up very well. Great write!