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I'll Care

as i watch your shadow fade into the distance
a tear forms in my eye
i press against the window again
before i break down and cry

i must leave you again, my love
but i will keep in touch
know that i keep you in my thoughts
and i love you oh so much

until that day when we meet again
remember the good times we shared
keep in mind i'll always love you
and forever, for you, i'll care

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  • Shuberth
    January 5, 2008
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    WOW

    I Like This
    Very Well Written...

    Keep Writing

  • Dark Edge
    January 2, 2008

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    I love it! The pic adds so much to the text and it reads really well... Heartfelt emotions and thoughts that are our own are what makes poetry and you've really captured it here. Great Job, A MILLION applauses... ( unfortunatly... It only allows me to really give you three... it's unfair really...)


  • Poet-of-the-shadows
    January 2, 2008
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    He is so lucky to have you carlie


  • Kia Tenshi
    January 2, 2008
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    The background makes it a bit hard to read. But a lovely write<3

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