Honey I miss you
my burning love for you
beats in my chest.
But I guess we are only two lovers
on opposite sides of the fence.
Do you miss me,
do you think of how
you've broken my heart
and made it so numb?
I feel so damn dumb.
You made me believe
in a love so true
but I guess it wasn't meant for us
my darling, my honey
now all you make me want to do is expire.
I know you watch me
as
I
fade
away.
I do believe it is time for me to go,
to leave you in your sweet misery.
Honey- I scream!
I scream, "I just wanted you to love me".
But in this case...
We're just two lovers
on opposite
sides
of the
fence.
Author notes
"The ways of love" by Pavlova
http://pavlova.deviantart.com/art/The-ways-of-love-23408858
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest (January) by Denierim.
1000 points, ended February 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the emotions in this piece. I have to admit I'm not much into poetry of subject like these, but this one's very well written. You were able to pour a lot of emotions in your words that tell all there is to tell about missing and longing someone you can see but cannot reach and touch. I like how you crafted this purely based on emotions of loss, and you did it very well.
Great job with this one!
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This is very good sweety
.Goodluck to you with this piece in your contest best wishes and much love
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uhhh im confused.
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hehe I reserved a spot in the contest.
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