Lift me up
into the sky
to clear my sins
to smile and sigh
A question that
will always be
is who in this world
will ever love me
Bring me down
to reality
though I'd rather stay
with my fantasy
Clouds move away
to reveal the sun
so clear now
the pain I shun
Alone for now
but I don't care
I show my smile
I know my heart wont tare
I am so free
to fly so high
never again
will I cry
I see the light
shinning on me
from now till forever
happy I'll be
A contest entry
- Lift Me Up by Lost-Rose-Petal.
2750 points, ended January 18, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF see this picture by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended September 6, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Be that Smile in someone's life! by Tom The Invader.
625 points, ended November 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautifully written and to the point, this was sheer appreciation of something we all have and i liked it very much.
*Leah
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very nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
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Nicely done... solid rhyme and very uplifting in character... Thank you for sharing...
Ken
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wow...background was perfect!!
My eyes lit right up as i read this!
Thanks soo much for entering and lightening my day!!
L-R-P-
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