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awakening life
yawns... stretching from sweet slumber
springing forth new growth
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a warm gentle breeze
floats carefree and contented
sweet scented blossom
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harvest moon shining
sweeping up the rusty leaves
winds gathering strength
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crystal clear mornings
blanketed by clear blue skies
wearing winters coat
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Author notes
I added another haiku to make the four seasons...
Spring... Summer... Autumn... Winter
A contest entry
- Quickie -3 Entries/33 words total/3 Haikus Linked- 3 hours by Mercury Rising.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Seasonal Haiku by Judith Chandler.
525 points, ended January 23, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Seasonal " Haiku's" by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended October 16, 2008, 44 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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These are realy good I tried to pick the one I likes best but gave up they are all realy good.
Thank you for your entries and good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful! A very well written string of Haiku's. Congratulations of the well deserved trophies.
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cool
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I like the harvest moon sweeping up the rusty leaves. Lots of good detail in this chain haiku. Nice idea to write about all the seasons.
Welcome to my contest. -
all very soft and gentle peeks into the moments that make up the year...
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Congrats on the gold trophy. This was very beautiful... although beautiful doesn't seem to be the right word... not strong enough... it's just the imagery and the word choice they were so divine and so imaginative... I couldn't help but admire this... thank you so much for entering and good luck.
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This is a very nice chain haiku with each season in it. Good luck in the contest. Congratulations on the gold trophy
RedwingSpirit
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Lovely haiku chain with lovely imagery
Just what i needed to read!
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