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Blur

Blur
as the train
whistles to motion
Blur
as the boat
forges through ocean
Blur
as the car
screams too fast
Blur
as the colors
melt past
Blur
in inky transition
from my traveling
position

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  • NueteredBuddah
    January 4, 2008

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    This is very short and simple with a refreshingly straight forward idea. I think it's much more difficult to write an interesting piece without using huge, obviously from a thesauras, words. Thank you very much for entering.