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Small Gifts

All so busy,
hustle and bustle,
presents and tussle,
her joy,
the smell of pine bark,
and Christmas reflections,
twinkling in the branches,
small christmas gifts.

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  • Denierim
    January 5, 2008
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    You took a very typical and hard picture to write about, and yet you were able to pull it out well. This is such a sweet poem filled with Christmas spirit. Even though Christmas is pretty much over, this still puts me to the mood and brought a smile on my face. Thanks for that!


  • creationsfromheart
    January 3, 2008

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    excellent

    you done awsome with this picture prompt! I hope mine is a bit easier of a pic , I don't know that I could of came up with something for this pic! Good luck in this contest!