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Consign to Oblivion




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  • Aurielle
    January 21, 2008

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    very nice and simply to the point. This does depict of truth here we live by. How we grow to survive

  • Cyclical
    January 15, 2008

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    Sometimes, all you can do is carry on in the face of adversity. I enjoyed your poem for that message, and I thank you for helping to spread it!

    Thanks for entering!

  • hose30
    January 4, 2008

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    Wow an eye opener. I love the way the of the intense words and trueful meaning. You caught my attention from opening to close.I hope yu win this. You definitely brought to the front, the way life is. You are a voice for many people with this kind of abuse. great poem and powerful.


  • Shakespeare
    January 2, 2008

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    intense! This poem really touches me! I read it twice: one time slow, one time fast. It flows better and fits the frantic images portrayed... at least, it does to me. Great Write, Great Read!


  • Mezclita
    January 2, 2008

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    Hmm harsh... but quite the reality for some (too many, unfortunately). I like the conclusion... from the realization point on: "opening your eyes...". Thank you for it and gl with my contest as well as with the rest of '08 to come!! ^^

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