To dote;
To hope to quote
the notes we spoke,
but wrote the most,
would roast your ghost,
so don't come close.
Sitting in the dark,
we whispered nonsense to one-another.
Flitting,
knitting sparks,
we exist explicit
bliss, kissing
twisting mists
brisk blankets
hissing, listless.
Listen to me.
....as she sees through me....
....as if she knew me....
Truly dually
noted quoted
tidbits of spit
flit from lips,
hips tipped towards
distant days,
from listless haze
she fades to gray.
Don't go away.
Stay.
to stay?
Comments
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Hey, I haven't seen this style in a long time. This is also a Spoken Word technicque used in the beatnick jazz forms. Nicely done.
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Freaking awesome. I wish I knew what I was doing enough to know what I was doing when I do it.
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