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I need you.

I thought once, I knew this feeling well,
The hunger, the thirst to be under your spell,
I thought I had known what this feeling was,
How it worked, and how it felt.

But then you came back...
You came home.
Now you must leave...
As I write this poem.

I thought I could block out my feelings for you,
Thought I could ignore them, and not care for you,
But I was wrong...
I didn't know this feeling,
I probably don't know it now.

The truth is, girl, I need you.
I don't know how, don't know why, don't know how you do this to me.
But deep inside, I feel complete.
I haven't felt this before, not like with you.

Not like how I feel, just looking at you.
I don't need your body, I don't need you like that...
But I need your love...
I don't need to touch you, I don't need sex.
I just want to hold you...
That is enough.

But you'll leave again, and you'll come back again,
Then you'll leave... an endless cycle.
But when I watch you sleep... I know that I feel,
Something the whole world couldn't replace.

The problem is this....
I need you, and you know I'd give the world for even one minute to spend with you.
But that's just it!


This love I feel for you, this over whelming thing called love
I need you... and it scares me.

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  • Mujina
    February 7, 2008

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    I thought I could block out my feelings for you,
    Thought I could ignore them, and not care for you,
    But I was wrong...
    I didn't know this feeling,
    I probably don't know it now.

    I can relate to this..... Thank you for enetering.


  • Carefuldelusion
    February 2, 2008

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    t flows as a song whould, and it leaves a lot to my imagination as to what kind, I really like it. Something that was written from the heart indeed, it is lovely.


  • N e a r
    January 27, 2008

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    Whoa. Intense and anticipating of a write. I can't believe this hasn't won anything yet. This is pretty awesome.



    Thanks for entering your write at A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!



    M a r l u x i a


  • Hecate616
    January 24, 2008

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    Wow. thats kind of how I feel. You wrote that with a lot of feeling and isnt that what poetry is all about?

    best of luck!


  • xXxCry-HavocxXx
    January 23, 2008
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    Omg! this reminds me of my bf. Really Really sweet poem!


  • xHannahrexiax
    January 20, 2008

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    You must really care for her. This was an amazing write. The ending was beautiful. Keep up the good work. Thank you very much for entering, and I wish you the best of luck, not only with the contest, but with this girl.


  • Just passing by
    January 3, 2008

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    WWOOWWW!!!

    You must care alot about this person. And it seems like this whole loving thing is new to you.
    Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its a really good read and it flows well.


  • Survivingbychance
    January 2, 2008

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    and then god said let there by love, and you got struck by lightning. good right, joey. great actually. it will get better.

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