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Breaking Point

In my heart I hear your song
The broken ways I've strung you along
The voices from the shadows, grey
Burning me from the inside out

A dawning light
A morning new
An endless shadow
An empty place

Broken pieces of myself
Shattered on the floor
Leaving you to pick me up
When I'm too broken to move

Ashes in the air
Choking the life from you
Leaving you a mess & yet
You still help me when I fall

I could not be here without you here
A saving grace, a loving face
A helping hand, a smile for the dead
Even when everything has you down, you care


Author notes

Erm...yeah.
It's for a friend.
And he should know who he is.

Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?

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Comments

  • wolfram
    January 9, 2008
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    good job i love this


  • InsanityEmbodied
    January 2, 2008

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    Amazing

    Wow this poem is beautiful. Sure I'm not one for order in a poem but you make it look fun. Keep these kind up because they are wonderful.