Cold steel
Will penetrate flesh
The wound,
Will throb and smart
But far more painful
Are ones of the heart
Soothing Balm
Might cease the pain
That body blows impact
But what can heal
The deep cut wounds
That are only inflicted
Onto your heart
Yes, marks
And scars will fade
Forgotten long after the pain
But forgotten reguardless
But when the heart is hurt
The wound will forever remain
Author notes
found this poem, don't know how old it is.
But it seems to still hold true
Crazy-Dan
In a list
A contest entry
- Dark~Like~Me by Dak.
550 points, ended January 24, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - silent screams we make by moonburndcheese.
300 points, ended February 4, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like this its so true my favorite part was "yes, marks and scars will fade forgotten long after the pain but forgotten reguardless but when the heart is hurt the wound will forever remain" thank you for entering in my contest and i enjoyed reading thi
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"reguardless" should be regardless, no?
This poem is oh so true. No matter how much we think we have healed, the wound truly does always remain. Thank you for entering it into my contest.
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It does hold true, every last line,
"But when the heart is hurt
The wound will forever remain"
Loved this, its so true, everyone can relate to this and I just loved this,
Always yours
Ashley<3
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