You'll see me for a second,
in a bubble I'll appear;
with wings of soapy crystal
and my message is quite clear...
Nothing lasts forever,
so enjoy life while you may.
Just keep on blowing bubbles
and I'll never fly away.
A contest entry
- Faeries, Elves and Magical things! by x--nocturnia--x.
324 points, ended January 17, 2008, 13 entries
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''Just keep on blowing bubbles'' And that is the theme of the story, to always keep the hope, or faith, always know, "memento mori," that time is short and we need to keep that sense of amazement, that joie de vivre, the innocence.
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o i like it it so cute
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Thanks for reading, glad you liked it.
Ann
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awsome Ann i love it ... best of luck in the contest ... your friend xxx cheeky xxx
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Short, sweet and gorgeous thankyou and good luck!
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keep on writing and it could turn into a soap opera
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Neat. Liked the rhyme and the message of it. This would make a good poem to be in a childrens book.
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