Special Day
Kentucky has a special day
It’s set aside for fun
A time to party and to play
This day won’t be out done
It’s time to shop and buy the gifts
We’ll get the liquor quarts and fifths
It’s time to shop
It’s time to shop
We’ll plan a party taking shifts
Kentucky has a special day
The Birthday of a girl
So let’s go shopping this I say
And set her heart a whirl
Cathy’s Birthday makes us smile
We haven’t partied in a while
Cathy’s Birthday
Cathy’s Birthday
We shop for gifts in every aisle
Kentucky has a special day
The gift I bought is real
A stripper that will sing and sway
A guy with buns of steal
A party guy that she can keep
And snuggle close when she’s asleep
A party guy
A party guy
Don’t tell her husband; not a peep
Happy Birthday Cathy!
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For AP poet: Daviscth
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Wonderfully fluid and dancing stanza form for a birthday greeting; the rhythm carries us away and the repetition/rhymes break expectation in just the right places to create surprise and delight. Beautifully chosen for such a fun content. Very well done.
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I love this form, and it's perfect for this poem! So lively and fun! I always get such a kick, seeing what you come up with next... I think she'll love it!
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What a wonderful poem!!! I really enjoyed reading this but is it wrong that it made me crave Kentucky whiskey?
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thanks... nah, I'll have some with you.
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Excellent Writing
"buns of steal"? Maybe so? Much enjoyed reading this.
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Love this!!
Oh My Apple Pie what a Birthday Gift
You have given
Wonderfully woven Sweet One!!
Magnificent form too
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~~
Best wishes to You in the contest Beautiful!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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LOl ameera this is too funny and written greatly your poetry is always very awsome! Love this...
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LOL!!! What a laugh I got from this!!!! I loved it!!!
You have for sure put a smile on my face with this delightful birthday poem. LOL. I promise not to tell my hubby! Thanks so much for doing this. I really love it! -
This sort of poem's not for me
But I shall have a go
I like your rhyme for fun Cathy
You're putting on a show
A lovely rhyme for poet sweet
Who sets some contests rather neat
A lovely rhyme
A lovely rhyme
A tour de force that is complete
This clever poem that I can see
I'm sure Cathy will love
I do prefer to rhyme more free
And give most forms the shove
But in this case and in such cause
I'll let my doubting take a pause
But in this case
But in this case
I'll sharpen up my rhyming claws
This lovely poem, not by me
Shows you in sunny mood
In such a happy naughty mood
And with a present rude
A naughty girl, a rhyming god
Who's poems are so neatly shod
A naughty girl
A naughty girl
Sometimes perfect but sometimes odd!!!
Hmmmmmm
not sure about the form, and once again I have developed the first lines.
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This is quite funny and the sentiments are sincere and fun. I can't find my policeman pants... can I go as a firefighter?
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