You found me, you raised me
You gave me life
Tiny, heartbroken, lost
You breathed your soul into me
Together, emotion combined
We share breath, we share love
We remain as one, alone
Sweetness aplenty
Intertwined in your arms
The safety, the warmth
The infinite love
This courses through our veins
I will love you forever
This emotion we share
Is priceless, so precious
For nothing, but air
Author notes
Used the picture for inspiration
A contest entry
- 136th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended January 3, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest!! Please enter!! by With Broken Wings.
1200 points, ended March 15, 2008, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~The Special Month of February~ by Sweetangelgrace.
800 points, ended February 6, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Valentine Poetry... a contest for teens age 13 to 18 by Melodies.
600 points, ended February 12, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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AWWW... "We share breath" is very profound!
A really romantic poem, so well penned for Valentine's Day! 
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Dear Poet,
I could feel the desire in these words. Wishing it was me it was writen for
Good luck in my contest!
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This poem is so... wow! I like it a lot.. Great write =].. Thank you for entering, and good luck
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You have created such a beautiful world within your words of love and it is hard not to be dragged under and into this world, well done
Karen
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You can feel the love flowing from your lines
The introduction sets up the ambience of this piece and you follow it through to the ending...Good luck in the contest.
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This is really sweet and very well written goodluck to you in this contest best wishes and much love always
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Thank you for entering this very passionate piece. You did a wonderful job expressing your emotions for this person. The rhyming, though simple was not flawed and the flow was smooth. It is my fault for I did not post it, but would you mind putting what option you chose in your author's notes? Thank you
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