Hello? Oh yes mother, I've been a good boy,
nono mother I haven't used his socks for a toy.
Yes mother I eat all my food,
no mother I don't sit and brood.
Yes mother dear I take my big bone outside
and nono mother I would never wee inside!
Yes mother I'm feeling quite tired
I have to go now as nap time's required.
Oh finally thank goodness I can't stay awake
I just wish sometimes she would give me a break! zzzzzzzzzzzz
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A contest entry
- Cute...Very cute3 by crimsondew.
460 points, ended January 7, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hehehe poor overworked puppy, what a life eh, it is so hard for some, never getting a moment's peace. a good fun poem.
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This is cute.
Well-expressed.
Congrats on the Gold!
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Great!
Once again you have caught the personality of the pic.
You gave the puppy a human voice! Favorite part: "Oh finally thank goodness I can't stay awake I just wish sometimes she would give me a break! zzzzzzzz Reminds me or my husband and his mom! lol -
lol..This is so cute with a good flow.
Thank you for entering my contest.
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Now this is fabulous.. I love this so much I must bookmark it, please let this win gold, it seriously is just gorgeous hun... well done and goodluck
Karen
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awwwwwwwwwwww this is such a cute take on the picture and i could just imagine the dog saying all that. well done gran and best of luck
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