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A Very Dark Night.

There's such a beautiful silence,
on this eerie black-clad night.
A couple of flickering candles,
are casting an ambient light.

A sleeping dog in the hallway,
stretched out on a red-tiled floor;
is oblivious to all, when a shadow,
slowly looms up to the door.

An old clock is ticking so quietly,
to the regular beat of my heart.
A sudden loud rap on the door,
wakes us up, with a jolt and a start.

I open it very gingerly;
giving a short, but nervous cough.
My elderly neighbour is asking...

" Is YOUR wretched power still off?"






 

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    January 3, 2008
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    yes good one. what a twist. superb again ann xx


  • Terri Norris silver member
    January 2, 2008

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    Alright...you made me smile!!
    Your work is such a pleasure to read...wish Honey Bear was on more, she would LOVE this.
    Great job Ann, thanks for sharing!
    Always,
    Terri.