Young goddess in red, soft smile on her face;
Sweet angel woman, my saving grace.
She speaks of the stars in such tender tone;
And prays for a prince to call her own.
She seeks the good man who would share her fate;
Love and protect her, she waits at the gate.
Her gentle heart hurt, left out in the rain;
When she finds her prince, she'll forget her pain.
I see from her words she hails from the sun;
With magic and love her heart can be won.
When just the right man bows low at her feet;
She’ll open the door to a love so sweet.
We search for the same, one lover of worth;
A prince, an angel, who walks the earth.
We could share our fate through eternity…
my saving Grace, and Grace saving me.
Author notes
for Grace..almost a year later and I am more glad than ever that I wrote this for you!
Feel free to comment..and please read my other work..
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hahah
very nice
yes i did like
'very good job
and this grace must be lucky
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Mat, may you and your Grace ...
live happily ever after ...
You write with such passion ... I forgot I do not read erotica.
Myra
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Such adoration expressed with such....grace. This has a medieval feel for me, you have an amazing talent.
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This is so compelling.. and such tenderness in these words! What woman wouldn't swoon at this...
Just beautiful!
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Congratulations on winning the Bronze in the contest. This was such a beautiful and heartfelt poem about romantic love. Very worthy of the trophy!! You take care, Sandy
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ohhh. I love it. especially since you used grace. JK that doesn't effect it. I really like this poem, especially here;
We search for the same, one lover of worth;
A prince, an angel, who walks the earth.
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To the author,
This poem has become my FAVORITE...
I personally can relate to many of the verses as true experiences. My life and Love life and the person I love now is like a dream come true... and everything that you are saying in it is the same way I feel towards this guy that I am totally in love with!
I'm hoping that as the days grow past i'll get closer to him...
Your saving grace,
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An angel with wings held high, bring grace to us all. Soft and uplifting words to read. Well done, thanks for sharing
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How wonderful sweet and beauiful your words are...some connect in life for many reasons and when we do it is wonderful...for even angels bleed and hurt...I am sure you have honored her with your words as you have all of us to feel such love...
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beautiful and sweet piece
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Great job I can remember writing a poem like this before I was married when I was a teen wondering and wanting to meet my fate and I have this reminded me of that. Thank you for this beautiful piece
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Once knew a wonderful woman called Grace but could never have penned such a startling paeon of love as this. Beautifully executed.
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Magnificent!
The last 2 lines are a great play on words. We search for the same, a lover of worth..
Well stated, good images,intelligent rhyming...
Tecohe
. Rewarded 4
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"I see from her words she hails from the sun;" unless you're talking about a poem of hers you read, this doesn't really fit. actually, it's only the "I see from her 'words'" part.
"She seeks the good man who would share her fate"
Fate is a word that is more slouched towards the negative side. Try another.
This is a beautiful piece! I enjoy the rhyme scheme in it.
You know my editing rules It's always up to the author in the end.
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The phrasing of the last line is very neat. I like the story - one many can relate to. Thanks for entering.
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aw, how sweet is this poem!!!
I think every girl feels this way at some point, wanting to be whisked away by the prince who will love her forever...and wishes every guy could a.) understand this notion so well and b.)put it into words for her as poetically as you did.
A wonderful write that expresses the idea perfectly.
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Wonderful
I loved this poem. To be swept away by a prince that is what fairy tales are made of. "When she finds her prince, she'll forget her pain". This line is so true. All the pain we go through until we find that perfect someone. Once we meet love washes that pain away. Further this line "With magic and love her heart can be won" Beautful words. What a great verse. I hope you will be lucky and find that special one. Thank you for sharing your words.
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Nice.
Very romantic.
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very romantic piece you've written here!
incredible lines here...
She seeks the good man who would share her fate;
Love and protect her, she waits at the gate.
Her gentle heart hurt, left out in the rain;
When she finds her prince, she'll forget her pain.
I see from her words she hails from the sun;
With magic and love her heart can be won.
When just the right man bows low at her feet;
She’ll open the door to a love so sweet.
good luck in the contest
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not bad.
very heartfelt, although a little like everything else. I've read/written alot about love but I like the closing lines. Very good! -
Love it. I'm a sucker for romance, and the image of princes and angels did it for me. Final line is great.
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A sweet and wonderfully written piece this is!
Loved it!
(I am a sucker for romance)
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How wonderfully romantic and sweet your words are...a prince indeed...beauty in words to touch any womans heart...excellent!
Congrat's on the wonderful work of Gold!
Love,
mystic
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Exquisite beauty and romance, for sure to win over a heart!
More than worthy of the gold (even though I have not read a single other entry
) Even so, I love it!
I'd like a prince such as this ♥
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To Sigh For...
Can I help it if I like this poem so much, I read it at least once a day? Yeesh. It's just so.... perfectly 'charming' and romantic, of course. And hey... where's my poem, mister? I've only been waiting 3 years now. Harumph! To the boot with ye!
[chuckle] Okay, so maybe I already have my Prince Charming. But I must say, blessed is the girl who wins you, my friend.
There are very few people who truly care about others before themselves. There are even less who take the time to learn the heart and soul of another with such consideration, desire, and patience as you often do. You are a terrific friend, a wonderful human being, an AMAZING poet, and most definitely The Unfound Prince.
One day, your Princess will look upon you and smile.
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thanks Sandy
you're a pet...thanks for your wish upon a star..and here's to Exupery and his Little Prince...and their rose. I am humbled by your friendship..
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very nice
I realise that I'm nothing compared to you!! well, it's easier to write poems in romanian, but I can write in english too...but I guess I'm not that talented...
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A beautiful piece, lovely rhythm and rhyme. It's soft and endearing and expresses what so many of us are hoping to find. Lovely work hun, hugs, Bunny
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nicely done
but beware of women in red
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Whewwww...I'm breathless!!!
Of all the poems I've read in LOVE POEMS this is the one that touch me the most.
To be honest "Saving GRACE" has an excellent flow that keeps my attention,it made my heart tingle when i read it. I've read it three times now and wow!!! It really sounds like you really wrote this with your heart.(wink)
especially this lines:
"my saving Grace, and Grace saving me."
Thank you so much for entering my contest and the expression of your beautiful words...
this one really hits home,Gottaa run no words left..
~~GRACE~~
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Well this should certainly impress her if anything will. A sweet romantic piece written with a delightful rhyme and meter. Nicely done and I wish you well in the contest. Hope you have blessed New Year. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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Wonderful!
Jeez, I'm such a romantic. I truly enjoyed this piece. It was lovely, like a fairytale in the making, and I do love fairytales.
Normally I don't copy & paste, but I loved this:
We search for the same,
one lover of worth;
A prince, an angel,
who walks the earth.
Spoken like a true (romantic at heart) poet. And don't we all seek that one lover of worth.
Nicely done. Which is probably why I can't wipe this goofy smile off of my face now.
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