Over in the meadow,
Where the daisy ring grows,
The fairy lake flows,
And the Wood Nymphs pose,
This is where the young
deer does go,
To rest his head,
And sleep,
Like the the hermit crab knows.
Author notes
lalala
A contest entry
- Over in the Meadow ~~ Contest for kids up to age 13 by Emerald Lass.
450 points, ended January 5, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Cute
Cute lassie better than my very first poem haha my very frist poem was a depressing poem called dark days but you beat me at happiness on this one lass
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haha 'lassie' kool =D
d first poem i wrote waz on Dec 5th 2007 n iz called 'Torture'iz on allpoetry.com
well at least d 1st poem dat i wrote dat i didnt hav 2 rite @ skool anywayz.lol.glad u like it =D
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Love the fairy tale quality of this poem, for it is filled with enchanting lines and images. A fairy lake is wonderful to imagine... and the daisy ring.
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glad u liked it
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It was a generally pleasant idea of fairytale sort animals/creatures smushed together with some halfhearted (I felt they were lacking, overused) rhymes... ended with sleep.
Nice, but... it left a lot to be desired as a soothing mystical view of some land interesting. -
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overused?
halfhearted?
ended with sleep?
A lot left to be desired?
i didnt think so...xcept 4 it ending with sleep, i mean what am i supposed to end it with? the dear going psycho with rabies?
not 2 sound rude or anything.
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