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parsnip pixies

Do you know of the parsnip pixie's
they live under the ground
doing good things for the community
You will know if they're around!
Each parsnip seed thats planted every carrot seed that's dropped
must be checked out by the pixies So that tragedies are stopped.
They make certain that their heads are up, their bottoms facing down
Before they can relax and have a drink out on the town
Although you may not believe me
You may think that they are not there
Have you ever seen a parsnip grow with its bottom in the air?

Author notes

may not be quite what you want but i will be back.
childrens

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  • SweetNessaLynn
    July 8, 2008
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    This one made her laugh. Jasmine really likes it.


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 7, 2008

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    Oh, yes, this is great! YAY! I can see myself reading this to children, the story you tell would bring such smiles to their faces...I love it!

    Thanks for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • SweetNessaLynn
    July 6, 2008
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    This is adorable. Great job! Thank you for entering.


  • icyrose
    June 4, 2008
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    haha thank god for those pixies! thanks for entering!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Cuteness!!! Glad those pixies are there to save the crops! lol

    Thanks for the entry


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    Many thanks for your entry in our contest. Please join us in our next contest.

    Sue and Jeff


  • creationsfromheart
    January 8, 2008
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    what an interresting write and from a point of veiw of the fairy,


  • adios muchachos gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    I think this is "Muy Cute"! No, I've never seen one with their "Bottoms Up!"

    Best of luck in this thing.


  • VoltaicHypnosis
    January 3, 2008

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    Hey I wasn't sure if it WAS what I wanted... but this is actually very well done. A fairy's a fairy and I especially love the flow from the fifth line down Good luck!


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    January 3, 2008
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    Nice

    It's a nice poem.
    I really liked the last line.
    Good Luck!


  • annamoy
    January 2, 2008

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    Lovely and I like the humour here, just one thing it should be "they're" in line four and you need an apostrophe in "that's". Good luck in the contest.

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