There's another. There's another. There's another.
Another to fondle and another to sing to.
There's another to praise and to change.
Another to lie, and another to shine.
The other barely seen came from the giver's peripherals.
Another conversation, another sick temptation.
Another lie, breeds another sigh.
Fetal cares, follow fetal promises.
Together only in a myriad of dreams, face to face, and corny whispers in the mellow-toned voice of sweet lies.
I'm left with the fetal cares,
for another, there comes nightmares...
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Nalyd.
A contest entry
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1800 points, ended February 26, 2008, 120 entries
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Comments
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i see why you picked this poem for my pic
it has great depth
i am glad you were able to enter!!!!
thank you for entering the contest...
--kat -
A very interesting poem. Considering my mind is currently swimming with thoughts and images otherwise unrelated to this poem, I had to reread it. It was wonderful though. It had it's sad tones, obviously, but it was very captivating. "for anthor, there comes nightmares..." Beautiful.
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Aaaaawwwwww its so sad! But anyway, good write as always!
Happy New Year!
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