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Uprising

Marked indefinitely
        rebellious fever settled.
Seasonal impulses cringe
        a pulsating war revives.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    This reads like a boiling fester. Which is actually a very good thing!

    Much Love,
    Mark


  • Naridill
    January 15, 2008

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    Oh.. nicely done - different perspective - which is always good

    Thanks for entering - much luck.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 2, 2008

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    beautifully written from the picture and really brings it to life so i can close my eyes and image it. well done and best of luck