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chasing cars

if i lay here
if i just lay here
would you lay with me
and just forget the world
i lay here alone
wait for you
on the floor
in the hall you stand over me
like the stars in your eyes
i dont know how to say how i feel 
i say three words
there not enough
i said to much
close your eyes
what do you see
nothing but you

Author notes

this was inspired by my favourite song chasing cars by snow patrol

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  • Simply Simple
    January 4, 2008

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    Oooh! I love this. I love the song too. I really love how you used the lyrics in the song. Wonderful job. I love it! Hehe. I will definately have to read some of your other stuff. ^.^