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Til Death Did Us Part

The twitching eyes warn me,
You’re only looking for blood tonight,
And as a punch rolls off my head,
I fear I’m losing more than a fight tonight.
A broken lung,
Crutched as payment for your broken heart,
I’m on the ground again.
I’m losing conciseness again.
And you said,
I’d never live to this to my friends.

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  • Fools Like Me
    January 2, 2008
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    Cough this should have won. Cough

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    This is a good take on the prompt thank you for your entry goodluck to you in this contest best wishes and much luck