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He Who Captured My Heart

It's the devulging smell of his musky breath,
The vastness of his oceanic blue eyes,
The lingering taste of his sweet kiss,
The soft touch of his coarse hands,
The criminal smell of his devious cologne,
And the heavenly sound of his laughter.

My heart,
My soul,
My love,
My savior,
My husband,
Travis.


Tell me if by the desciption, sounds sexy or as good as I tried making him sound

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  • scars-of-yesterday
    January 9, 2008

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    Good write. And yes I think that he sound very sexy! When your done with him can I have him? lol! I would nver do that, unlike some people. *cough cough* Taisa.

  • wat2do
    January 3, 2008

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    it would have made him sound as good as you wanted him to if i didnt know him. But you did a good job. and last time i checked your not married yet.