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Deaths Grip

Her reflections decaying as her last breath is slowed by the wings of the butterflies. 

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  • Fools Like Me
    January 2, 2008
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    Cool


  • Ephiphany
    January 1, 2008
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    Great job, in a short form. Thank you for entering, good luck.

    ephiphany♥


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    Wow... I love how you were able to say so much in just that one line! It really packed a punch! Well done, and good luck