His scent lingers,
Pauses of breath in the silence.
The cold face of the moon stares down,
Mocking,
Everyone seems to.
But I find hope.
Imprints of him surround me,
Everything is focused,
Around him.
No one believes it could happen.
But I find passion.
The reassurance of his touch has passed.
Something acquired and never forgotten.
Desperation falls near,
But I find faith.
The sight that produces an uncontrollable wave of devotion,
Will it ever appear again?
Complications that were resolved,
Has the sight of love suddenly vanished from your eyes?
The note that changed me.
It states there is no us,
It is I and him now.
But I find love.
Late,
I find myself pondering,
What does this convey for me?
Vanished like the act of a magician’s cape,
Covering the stars of our hearts.
I seek no condolences,
For I,
I find hope.
It's my first poem posted, so please don't kill me :|
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Welcome to AllPoetry
G'Day mate
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Strongly penned, from beginning to the flourishing ending.
Enjoy AllPoetry
Stay safe
~Manda
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Beautiful
An amazing write for an amazing person. I'm glad to know that you have this talent, it'll make things more interesting between us Keep it up eh?
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Great first write. You have some talent. You should really keep writing because I see something good in your writing. Great job this is a very true and heartfelt piece. I recognize these feelings very well, keep writing.
Josh
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wow now this is a fantastic first poem you made this poem come to life
i like this poem just like you wrote it no parts better than another
bless you
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