I live this distortion
while reflecting this horror
my thoughts of revulsion
every minute every hour
Do you see me?
A contest entry
- Dead Beauty ~ Picture Inspired~ Contest by AddictiveTRUTH.
840 points, ended January 1, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hello
I haven't seen the image attatched, yet it works
invoking an underwater feel...?
although, I'm not sure about the last line; I felt dragged out of a reverie by the self-consciousness of the question
thanks for the read
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Thank U. I added the photo if you want to see the prompt. Thanks for seeing beyond the image
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spooky!
and seeing beyond the image are what words are about, so thank you
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Well son I clearly see a man, wrapped up in work, family, life and the need to relax, truly relax for just one real day. But you son can't the aries I see.
My workaholic son!............
novy
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I love that last line. You always amaze me with your thoughts. Congrats!
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This was a little off for me but it came out. I guess I should always spill things out.
Thanks again. You are spoiling me 
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Deep and thought provoking entry
great take on the contest picture prompt, thank you for entering and good luck.
ephiphany♥
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