In your thoughts I see shining skies
Watching as birds fly past our vision
Feeling so happy that I smile day after day
It’s in this world that I see your smile
And we are open to the bright beginnings
It’s in this world that I notice your grace
Where people smile for no reason at all
It’s in this world that my cares and sorrows are forgotten
And where I can finally seek complete comfort in your love
Its in this world that temptation and selflessness are but memories
And where love flies free and unfettered.
Its in this world that our thoughts, no matter how insignificant
Will burst with color and joy
Its in this place that I fall for you faster and faster
And no matter the obstacle, we will push past it.
This world resides in our hearts
All we have to do is love each other and we will reside there everyday.
A contest entry
- Finding New Love by Simply a Memory.
330 points, ended January 8, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes.......But it has to have emotion by Nikki Rowles.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
To Ashtyn
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Beautiful
Yes indeed to see joy you have to feel it to know what it is to feel love you must love for it to carress your heart
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Wow...yet another great poem...it's so worth being up at 4:10 in the morning....and yeah Ashtyn is one lucky girl to have someone soo sweet love her so much....I wish you both luck forever...if I haven't said it before
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AWE!
So beautiful and so true
That is a beautiful world of love that the heart holds so close. Should be cherished and watered daily
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Hmmmm I wonder who this could be....well once again lil bro you did an excellent job. Thanks for entering, and good luck.
I love ya lotz
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this is a beautiful write bro and holds deep emotions in it aswellas strength and longing. well done and keep penning
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