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Passing moments

Each mile
Each minute
The distance grows
Clinging to memories my heart pines for your touch

Each mile
Each second
My love grows
God knows the season my blessed lover
Always Infinate Endless

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  • Star Shine
    February 19, 2008
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    Lovely style, builds with the feeling of longing and anticipation. Well done.

  • celadia
    January 14, 2008
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    I think a lot of religious people look forward to meeting their God. The poem reminded me of this.


  • TeChNoWC
    January 7, 2008
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    This is beautiful

    Love you (L)


  • Blueskywonder
    January 2, 2008

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    Such beautiful thoughts expressed here within the content of this deeply moving piece.
    Beautiful words expressing your Love, Always Infinate Endless
    Great Apple... it's nice to see you writing