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The Broken girl

Rebel, sweet Chaos
Sour perfection
Take this white world
And rape it of it's pride.
Rebel scream
Rebel Bleed
Rebel love to hate me
China doll whore
Glass eyes, plastic smile
Crystal glass tears
Dirty little girl
Sing your jaded song of sorrow
Broken Ballerina
Gutter princess
Whore...
What do you care?
Bitch
Of course
FUCK IT ALL
Tear it apart
I will watch it crumble around me
I will watch it crush you
Rebel? Saint? FUCK
Again? Sedate?
Always

Author notes

A little piece I enjoyed writting one night when I was pissed off and on something (Though what I couldn't tell you). This too was about a girl I dated. Arn't I romantic?
Written November 6th, 2003

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  • thought i knew
    January 21, 2004
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    definetly a romantic hehe. Sounds like this chick really did a number on you eh?! don't worry she'll get hers hehe *evil smile* This was an awsome vent keep up the good stufF
    *hugs*
    liz


  • NurseFloyd
    November 12, 2003
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    Damn Bevin, I wish I was an ex girlfriend. I mean, I always wanted a poem about me like that. Fuck! Why dont I get that love!?!?! heh. Great write. Your oh so talented... (it is hard to actually complement you. because your such a whore) but i am trying!

    ~Jenna

  • SternBlinkin
    November 6, 2003
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    Well break ups are hard. I like it personally. And i like how you were honest with how you felt and didn't hold it back. I really really like it. i mean like alot! You are a great poet.
    Keep writing on and on forever...
    *Stern~Blinkin*