To you my love I'd give the world
Or atleast all I have within mine.
I'll shelter you from every storm
Hold you close when sun does shine.
When the wind and rain is over you
I'll pray to the heavens above.
To always keep you safe and warm
In the blanket of my love.
I thank the heavens every day
For bringing your love to me.
For you being all I ever dreamed of
And for setting my love free.
In a list
A contest entry
- Fly Away With Me! by whispernthedark.
795 points, ended January 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What About Love? by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ofcourse a beautiful poem..
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This a very wonderful poem
full of such sweet imagery .
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Oh this was so beautiful! How has it not won anything yet?! [doesn't understand] - particularly liked the last two lines where you stated that the love has been set free - it reminds me of a quote from the Sound of Music show;
"the love in your heart wasn't put there to stay
love isn't love 'til you give it away"
Great job
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aww now this is a nice write here,
i likes this one, it shows real love and emotion,
and the rhyme is alright too,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
The touching piece is of an honest heart and a sensitive soul. Not a melody can be more beautiful than the tune of love. Very impressive.
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delectable hmm no not the right word, charming. any wayI love it as usual
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Beautiful
This is beyond words for me right now.. But I can say, amazing.. It touched the soul.
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Sweet poem. Thank you for sharing and entering the contest.
♥
whisper
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very romantic and deep. it's very good. it's nice to show someone how much you love them.
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