Smiles turn to touching lips
Touching tongues and skin against fingertips
Crooked grins and happiness
There's no hint nor trace of distress
The faces turn and now I see
I wake with a sweaty start, it was you and me
One silent tear slides down my cheek
That's the second time I've dreamt of you this week
When I see you today I'll play it cool
But on the inside I die everytime i look at you
And every smile you send my way
Makes me thirst for you to kiss the pain away
My fantasies are taking over me
Pressed against you close is where I wanna be
It's getting harder to tell games from reality
If you don't do something soon, I will, and who cares if they see?
3 steps forward
You beckon me closer without a word
2 1/2 steps back
The hand that was reaching for you drops slack
Smiles turn to touching lips
Touching tongues and skin against fingertips
I've seen this before, and just like then
I'm pulled back to this place we're in
When you come towards me I can feel my heart drum
But you pull back farther, the closer you come
And even when I don't know what to do
You surprise me, and leave me staring at you
I thirst for the peace that your touch brings me
Your lips against mine is the happiest I could be
I long for the feel of being close to you
I drink in the sight of you, I'ts all I can do
But no, I can do more, It's only the lack
Of certainty, in what you'll do, that's holding me back
But certainty or not, I can't just stare after you
I've got to do something, because i care, and i truely love you, too
I lay my heart bare, and hope for the best
You stand there and I'm put to the test
Your eyes find mine, and soften
Your smile cures my hesitation
Smiles turn to touching lips
Touching tongues and skin against fingertips
Is this a dream or just deja vu?
Whatever it is, I'm glad I'm here with you
Author notes
Qwerty
A contest entry
- THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY by bookworm987.
400 points, ended February 15, 46 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Smiles turn to touching lips
Touching tongues and skin against fingertips
I've seen this before, and just like then
I'm pulled back to this place we're in”
These are my favourite lines! Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.
-heva♫
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Thankyou
Firsty thanks for reading the rules and secondly this is a masterpiece and i'm ahppy to award you first place now however i have like 47 odd poems to read still...-groans- anyhow this is truly stunning nice work!
Best of luck
Gorecki
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wow. thank you very much and im glad you liked it so much
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I really like how you used daja vu in this poem.
Rhyme scheme sounded awkward in areas, but overall great write.
Thanks for sharing this piece and best of luck!
New plague
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Wow.
Pretty impressive. Great write
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thank you. i appreciate it
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wow, i really like the repeated parts best, great job
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thank you
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Thankyou for entering LoveNeverDies,
This was a beautiful write with so much emotion put into it, I really did enjoy reading this piece, and I wish u the best of luck.
(:
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thank you very much
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so much of love here...!!! i loved the devotion with which u have written this...
i think that is the essential ingredient in a poem...
lots of devotion actually hide the other flaws in ur words...
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thanks, im glad you like it
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Love love love love love! You've captured exactly how I have felt; dreams becoming so vivid its hard to seperate them from reality, needing the person to know how you feel. I was actually a little freaked out when I read this because I was like "did this person just read my mind and write a poem about it?" I loved the storytelling and the rhyming. This was rather long, too, but still kept my attention, which really means something. Best of luck in the contest!
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thank you very much. interesting.. i wrote this about a situation i was in a little over a year ago. come to think of it...i dont think i ever showed this poem to the person it was written for. anyways im glad it affected you so, and im kind of intrigued because you are not the first person to connect this to your own life
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This was beautiful
I'm glad you took the time to enter. 
Feel free to tell friends about it, and to enter another write, I'll enjoy reading it I'm sure.
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thank you. that's alot like the situation i was in when i wrote this, except she was an ex. im glad you were able to connect to it and enjoy it =)
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this is like a sweet torture
reminds me of a past crush
only we never got anywhere only in my head
lol i haven't thought of him in a long time
this just reminded me
thanx for the memory
this is a good write
ii enjoyed it especially the repetition
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