Once upon a time,
Something happened
to me,
it was the sweetest
thing that every could be,
A fantasy, A dream come
true,
it was the day
I met you!
I knew that I
was in love,
because my reality
is finally better
than my dreams.
Just when I thought
the world was over,
my heart soared like
a careless butterfly.
Your special smile
and special face,
you are that special
someone I can't replace.
I long for you each night
if I give you my heart
will you promise not to break it?
I want you to want me
I need you to need me
I love you to love me
I dream so I can see you.
Every time I
think of you,
I always catch my breath.
If I never met you,
I wouldn't like you
If i didn't like you,
I wouldn't love you.
If I didn't love you,
I wouldn't miss you,
but I did, I do and I will.
Author notes
to my punk rock prince chris
i love you
please tell me wat u think
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A write alive with love!
Well done, Stevie -- I loved the words:
my reality
is finally better
than my dreams
Is that not what love is all about?
May you and Chris be happy forever.
Love
Myra
Ps Thank you for reading my words; sincerely appreciated.
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lol i believe so
thank you for your kind words
and i hope me and chris stay in love for ever
Stevie
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I'm gettin this right
Final two stanzas are absolutely effing spot on. Go girl!! xx
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lol thank you
my boyfriend loves it too
matter fact he printed it out to put it at work
but thank you for ur kind comment
and im in deed in love
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Hope he
treats you like the princess you are!! He's lucky and I guess he knows it. x -
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he has an account on here
his nick is topherdg if you would like to go read some of his....two of them are to me but yes he knows he is lucky
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Beautiful!
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thank you for ur kind comment
Stevie
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This was cute You did really good with this thanks for reading my poem that means a lot I like this part in your poem
If I never met you,
I wouldn't like you
If i didn't like you,
I wouldn't love you
and this one
I long for you each night
if I give you my heart
will you promise not to break it?
I want you to want me
I need you to need me
I love you to love me
I dream so I can see you
great work lots of love SH -
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thank you for your kind comment
im glad you liked it
Stevie
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hahahaha, love is most delightful splendid thing. happyfor you. may your love for Chris grows an grow.
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