she sits and stares
but doesnt see
what she wants
or what she needs
she cries alone
in her little world
what could she do?
she was just a girl
she was scared
of herself thats all
but she couldnt help it
she didnt know why
why she hated
having to live
and why she didnt
want to die
but still
she sits and stares
but doesnt see
the girl she once knew
and wishes to still be....
Author notes
Earthquak! Duck!
oh yea and btw im 13 to so threr is no cussing but i do have some in my othere poems. PS: dont hold it against me! LOL
A contest entry
- A whatever emotions contest! by dreamersalwayslive.
600 points, ended January 13, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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Great!
I definately like this more than the other version, bot that the other one wasn't good. It good use some grammer marks here and there,lol. And thanks for entering my contest!
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