Collect the Virgins to sell on the streets
Cheaper then heroin
But just as lovely.
What’s your addiction?
Popular advertised suicide?
Commercial rape?
Perfect violence?
Where Is your God?
In those images of self castrated priests?
Or in the womb of your daughter?
LET US PRAY
Christ is beneath the skirt
The Virgin Marry
Miscarried
Purity on sale for the tainted
Where is your God?
In the drowned baptized child?
Or in the needle?
Hollow faith
Get down on your knees
And pray with your mouth
Pretty little Christian
God loves you
Author notes
Written November 6th, 2003
What did you think
Comments
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Wow
This is indeed an eye opener of a poem
Its different and unique I liked it a lot
Do come see me won't you
Blessings
Susan~~~~ -
Bevin, your so fucked up. But I loved the poem anyways! Very beautiful.. im.. just... speechless ::wipes away tear:: im so proud of you! haha, great write.
~Jenna -
WOW I really liked this!!! I'm not sure what other peoples reactions would be but I really really like it. I feel this way (or at least how i interpreted it) so so so very often!! I really liked the end I thought of the sodomy and the catholic priests on your knees and with the open mouths... but im not sure if thats what you were going for. either way i thought that this was great something with image, substance, passion, techincal, and just something that stays with you. YAY something well written! Happy writings.
Idiotic Soul
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