fighting
battling
must learn to express anger
afraid to express anger
must learn new ways
how do I clean house?????
heart hurts
yes...heart hurts
hurts BAD
I can say that
why did they make us do things?????
why did they make us hurt other people????
DID NOT WANT TO HURT OTHER PEOPLE
holding anger hard work
am tired
want release
need release
ARGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!
wanna scream
wanna do some things suggested
must find some that work for me
many suggested
will try to find a way to use some
many good ones
fighting messages
told so many times
hold it in
hold it in
it is your job
don't break down
don't let it show
someone will die
don't let it show
or someone will die
and it may be someone I know **tears**
gotta stop
can't cry
not here
not now
only inside
only in this place with words
not good to have for real tears
not alone
want a new job
am struggling
confused
want to change
need help
PLEASE
January 1, 2008
Author notes
I wrote this today at a survivor forum. It had to be modified...but only slightly.
I am an SRA survivor and this writing does reflect that. I realize that it may not make sense to someone not familiar with that kind of life experience. And yes...it is raw...straight from heart to post.
A contest entry
- Give Me [[RAW EMOTION]] by brittany.geeze.
525 points, ended January 8, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well i congratulate you on your heartfelt and raw emotion provided in this piece. I'll hopefully come back before the end of the contest and leave you a better comment. Thanks for entering.
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