My lips will tell you I love you
My eyes won’t tell you a lie
I’ll let you know just how I feel
I’ll dry your eyes when you cry
With all my heart I pray to love
With all my mind and will
You and me forever and ever
We walk hand in hand, arm in arm
Our steps just light as feather
Your love and your smile always warm
In you, all my dreams have been fulfilled
The way you gently kiss my lips
The soft caress of your finger tips
The sweet “Good Morning Babe”
Each day the faithful phone call
The sweet” I love you” before we fall asleep
And with your arms around me
The world could disappear
Never would I feel alone
As long as you are near
And if the stars should fade away
And the sun should never rise
I would never notice
If I could see into your eyes
The smiles on your face
From me, removes all my strife
Two souls divided in half
Two hearts, two minds, one destiny
We were meant to be together
I’ll prove to you this is so
My love for you is immense
A true love to you I’ll show
And when my time is ended
Up to heaven I will fly
I’d like to find you again
A contest entry
- "And The Greatest Of These Is Love...." by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended January 2, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling all Romeos and Juliets by PonyPride.
425 points, ended January 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmm
Although you show much talent, this just did not fit my fancy. Kind of on and on.. Im not trying to be mean as I sound just honest -
You amaze me with the way you can fill a page so full of love and romance, it simply steps off the screen and fills you up with its emotion. You have the gift of love and deep feelings in what you write, that is a gift. Just lovely. Love, Chez
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How wonderfully beautiful!
The love that emits from this piece just reaches out and warms the heart of your reader
Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of the contest!
Happy New Year!
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