I hate you in the morning when I awake
And the sun climbs through the window unto your face
I hate you with with the arrival of each new day
I hate that you're still here, why do you stay
I hate you when you roll over and wrap your arms around me
I hate you when I touch you and I feel your heart beat
I hate you when you smile and I see your polished white teeth
I hate you every time our eyes meet
I hate you every time you say I love you
I hate you every time that I wished it were true
I hate you when you grab your keys and walk out the door
I hate you with all of my heart and then I hate you more
I hate you with all the blood that flows through my veins
I hate you for all the times you drove me insane
I hate you when you're smiling and I'm here feeling blue
I hate you cause I know my sadness is all because of you
I hate you because I know you will never change
I hate you cause through it all I am the only one feeling this pain
I hate you cause you will never love me like I love you
I hate you cause I don't know what else to do
Author notes
Not meant to be poetic, just getting the frustration out.
A contest entry
- 10 Things I Hate About You by LoneFairrie.
600 points, ended January 3, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
And in the end there was nothing
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Wow
I hope I never make a woman feel like this. -
Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention
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I think this write is definatly poetic, thats what poetry is all about exspressing ones self wonderful write for the contest!
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Wow...great venting. Good job getting it out. It really grabs me. It feels a little rough to read...but that so fits the topic! I like it.
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I acctually love this poem. Its almost exactly what I was looking for. Great take on the prompt.
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