Entrancing melodies play softly within my heart
And the majestic stars are caressed by the moons light
The heaven's seduce the night in their velvet cloak
And dance to my delight~
Gentle winds blow through the tree's pursing lips
And tenderly touch my soul
The sky in its grandeur sprinkles
Silver on the willow's face
The warm breath of the fog blankets the earth
And silently embrace me~
Enticing notes flows from the nightingale's harp
And her voice bids my body to dance
Shimmering images reflect in the stars delight
Sensual kisses from the sky's falling dew
Shower me in the night~
Enchanting visions play in my mind
And elude me in carnal thought
The allure of the moon has me captured
The magical night pleasures me
And leaves me alone
Consumed by rapture~
A contest entry
- ~ SET the BAR ~ Anything Goes~ Possible of 5750 points handed out! by Florida Sunshine.
950 points, ended February 24, 2008, 182 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such a passionate filled poem. Wonderful. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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This is very well done Susan. I love your background as well as the picture. They really breathe life into your words. Congrats on the silver cup.
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Very nicely penned and so worth the Silver
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this is a winner
as it is romantic and desireable to kick back and enjoy the feel...nice post here, good luck in the contest
Linda
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The Silvery moon you speak of in this sensual poem could well earn you a Gold trophy, Sis! Very nicely done!
Best of Luck in this contest! This enchanting poem deserves to win another trophy!
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Love Ya!
♥ Maureen
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Ah, a real beauty here, sweet one.
A poem to read and wish you might be there.
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Excellent
Was great the first time I read it. And enjoyed reading it again. Best of luck in the contest. -
embrace s/b embraces.
You paint this scene with a poet's brush-a true delight to read and see the image as you paint it. Wonderful piece!
I hope you are feeling much better. Happy New Year!
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"Enticing notes flows from the nightingale's harp
And her voice bids my body to dance
Shimmering images reflect in the stars delight
Sensual kisses from the sky's falling dew
Shower me in the night~"
Oh, this gave me goose bumps this is so nice.
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Wow~ YOU TRULY are a POET ~ by all means of the word~ WOW ~ this is incrediably good~ ~ its perfectly said~
Thanks for entering the "Set the Bar" contest ~ Good luck to you ~
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"The heaven's seduce the night in their velvet cloak"
What a beautifully sensual line here poet.
There is such a soothing sense to these words. They flow like a light midnight breeze upon the brow. One that gently touches and makes one sigh. That's what this poem does for me Susan. A beauteous work of words are set out for us to enjoy. Exquisite! I wish you well in the comp.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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Beautifully penned and sincerely enchanting. Such a pleasure to read and be embraced by... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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This is an enchanting poem, Susan. The vivid imagery of this write makes me feel a part of the night You've done a superb job with the even flow, the soft texture of your words.
Good luck in the contest, Sis
Love and
Dee
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This is a beautiful poem with wonderful vivid imagery. The whole poem flows so nicely and makes me long to take a midnight stroll out in the moonlight. Unfortunately it's suppossed to rain day and night very heavily for the next four days so it'll have to wait. I'm bookmarking this.
~Amanda~
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Excellent!
Beautiful poem, Sis! I love the imagery...nightime is enchanting and so is your poem!
Best of Luck in this contest although I think this poem should be hard to beat!
Love You!
Maureen
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wow
You have truly painted a picture that moves within the mind of the reader, the emotions reach out and touch, I can see the place you describe. Great job blessings John
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beautiful in every word you have painted such delightful pictures with this poem that they easily transport me to the night you have described and it is entrancing.
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Very nice
Wonderful, sensuous imagery. Well written. You paint scenes well with your words. It leaves me with a longing for love. It not only describes nature but also describes passion. -
excellent imagery
Wonderful images are brought to mind by your words in this poem. It has a very peaceful aura surrounding it, and I enjoy some of your descriptive's, such as:
"Gentle winds blow through the tree's pursing lips"
"And the majestic stars are caressed by the moons light"
Good luck in the contest!
Ethereal One
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I love the pic', Sis. I'll have to comment a little later when I'm not falling asleep. Pain pill's kicking in big time..can hardly keep my eyes open.
Love you
Maureen
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Magnificent!!
Wow~ Magnificently penned Sis
Love this and the images You have brought forth
Might lovely~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit Beautiful
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is a wonderful smooth poem. Vivid imagery and dynamic mood. Well done friend.
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Excellent
Oh my sis, this is great. Another deep and touching creation. Best of luck in the contest
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