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Sliver Blades and Red Rubies

Sliver blades drips rubies
Slowly the rubies drip to the ground
The warm blood comes forth
Slowly oozing over
Spreading warmth
The blade twinkles like a friend
It whispers again do it again
Sliver blades drips rubies

Author notes

this is about umm let me get back to you. Its bout Sweeney Todd

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  • riasme
    January 2, 2008
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    a little, er, graphic, but it's really nice! I love the "the blade twinkles like a friend/it whispers again do it again" SO good! and yeah even though sweeney todd's rated R it has to be at least somewhat good, what with depp and rickman and bonham carter yesyesyes! great job I love it!!

    ~lise


  • LuckyBlackCat
    January 2, 2008

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    nice one leigh. . .la la la. . the worst pies in london!. . la la la! *smile*

    Nice Sweeney Todd poem. Good job!


  • StarIlluminated
    January 1, 2008
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    WHO THE HECK IS SWEENEY TODD??? but good write anyway...


  • BonaFidePoet
    January 1, 2008
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    Wow, Leigh! Nice work! Sheesh you do love Sweeeny Todd, I can tell. Short and sweet. Good job


  • DeadlyTurnip
    January 1, 2008

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    Umm, so this isn't about you? Is it? IS IT? *is getting overworked here, sorry*

    Well, it was written well, I'll give ya that. I liked your consenance. (spelling?)

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