Filled with a moment,a second
Of eyes gazing into each other
Intensity,passion roams within
My lips red with lipstick,anticipating
Waiting for your kiss,a wild dream...
Then I leaned forward,kiss
Soft and gentle,lovingly
Your moist lips on mine,secretly
Your lips became red like mine,heat
Your arms caressed me as you stopped.
"Do you want really want me to do this?"
My eyes filled with love,"yes...I'm sure"
Giggling,I kissed you back while your lips
Were still red,pressed against mine into the night...
Author notes
#2 – Use the title “Kiss While Your Lips are Still Red”
A contest entry
- 133rd Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended January 3, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What's your first impresion?
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always did love those lipstick marks,
the scarlet markings of passion shared, always hated to even wipe them off, but you get weird looks on the subway...lol...lovely poem...cute and sweet....lol~~Artis
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well...yeah it prolly does look a tad funny.
But atleast you got weird looks for good reasons. Yeah?
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what rapture seldom spent enough upon another,
the tether of flesh on flesh, tongue grazing against tongue, hearts hammering, eyes closed to the dreamy state of being loved, noses parked side by side, faces flushed, fingers wending trails of shivers as lips whisper wet want. great write~~Artis -
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Thanks Artis!
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I love it. I wasn't too crazy about the dialog in the last stanza but the sweet, vivid imagery and the dazzling word choice and the intense passion written into this were all fantastic.
Thank you so much for entering and good luck.
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Good take on your prompt...
All the best!
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Awwwww
so beautiful and sweet, oh how I long for this oh it's melting me...
Your lipstick,
Antonio
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hehe secret...This never actually happened. haha XD I made it up...SHHH
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Cooties!!!
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