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With or Without Him / Inner Voice

 

 

She measures up grains of sand
alone on the beach

feet dipped into the sea.
The wind trades with the moon
pulls her back to Manchester
her heart thickens
- wonders who's bottlin'up tonight.


You can place your desire for him in a bottle,

and I will send it to him on the ocean.

 

Bottle?  It's just mathematics -
a simple equation - she loves him
she loves/him not
him/her, eye to eye.
Blind man to a brailled page,
counts out the letters,
like pulling a daisy apart
petal by petal.


All love is calm and chaos.


Little-girls love songs
Mad-girls love poetry
Angeline loves .........

She loves,
turn a man on a sixpence,
spin him like a top to her hipbone.
So why is he, like butter to her?
hot knifed words spool between them
and still they make  toast!

He craves her voice like good red wine
a classy merlot, lots of tannin.
She gulps his words, like a pint of Boddies.


Drink him, you know how to swim.

He claims she's a witch, a bitch
with white magic in her fingers.
Her spells cast from ears to heart

then twists him.

He says call me-
I will always be,
then he won't answer the goddamned phone!
She bites her lip, tentitively dials
he whispers things that would make a nun blush.

Irrascible and cantankerous he chides her, and then calls her

back to read Rimbaud, like a pilgrim with a bible.

She confuses him/he worries her.
He aches for her, can't stand her to be near,

wants her flesh touch.

The woman in her, unfolds like filaments
every time he reads her skin,
she covers herself
embarrassed by his thoughts,

her lust.

 

You open up, always, for him.

Opens!  Is it dumb
or mathematics-schematics
Einstein would equate.
Freud would get on the couch.
Jung would jump into a gene pool.
just simple additions
of love with love
equals time/motion
love without love,
the pendulum swings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    January 6, 2008
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    This is truly poetic

    Beautiful penning.
    Buddy


  • misselaineous
    January 6, 2008
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    congratulations

    i was right
    it was always gold hunny


  • WolfHeart
    January 6, 2008

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    OMG! This is my life story with my husband. People thought we would kill each other, but the sex was to fantastic. You told the story in a way that enhanced the prompt. I just love this and the gold was so derserved - congrats!

    Wolfie


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    "all love is calm and chaos..." brilliant, yes. I am blown away by this entry. If I continue, it will simply be gushing, so I will say, thank you, and pray to GAWD I get more entries like this Love, Lane


  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    opening up is never without risk... is it? love is a funny thing.. it gets mixed up with need and so many other things, it's almost impossible to find it alone among it all ..

    seems that when it disappears for me, what I recall the most is the tangible tactile part that passes..



  • DogFish silver member
    January 2, 2008
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    ...top drawer stuff, "Chilly"!


  • rendezvous
    January 2, 2008

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    Oh, what scandal you tie within your words! Excitingly sensual and subtly erotic. A true pleasure to read.

    jen


  • tara wilson gold member
    January 2, 2008

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    he whispers things that would make a nun blush...lolol

    I love this... you have to get these published...

  • Rowan gold member
    January 2, 2008
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    a rollercoaster of expression, and love. Excellent.


  • jantastic gold member
    January 2, 2008

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    the poet also opens herself in words...




  • AJ Morelli gold member
    January 1, 2008
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    i love this...


    al


  • misselaineous
    January 1, 2008
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    came back for another inhale of gloriousness


  • zochit2me gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    Oh love...
    yes the pendulum will always swing and yet I think we will never understand "love" or the concept of it. Our hearts never control who we love, nor do our minds...
    it just happens -accidentally and then we are left in a state of mushy mess
    Still it draws us to it every chance it gets and we go willingly like soldiers to war.

    Thank you for sharing your heart

    Becky


  • Heart Sutra
    January 1, 2008

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    I still stand by the fact that you could publish this series of Angeline poems in a collection: Angeline in Manchester.

    You attention to the most interesting of details never escapes me, especially in this longer pieces.

    I can feel your heart in this one...

  • Cwm
    January 1, 2008

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    lol I don't know how to comment on your poetry, but we all know its damned good! This poem was like eating a good sandwhich, first bite, knew it would be good.... to the last bite... then it was like, "damn, that was a good sandwhich!" You told a story told millions of times but it was refreshing and some-what new... bravo!


  • Nicolette gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    Will we ever understand this thing called love, attraction, the push and the pull, the tides, the seasons... closer than a heartbeat, further than the moon...?

    Magical poetry, my friend... your inner voice speaks beautifully and throws pebbles into the deep waters of the heart. Excellent poetry!

    ~ Nicolette


  • IronIcecream
    January 1, 2008

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    imprints in sand
    occasionally shells and a starfish

    the waves
    rustle coming through
    hypnotized by her gravity

    warm currents
    salt
    and foaming hope
    form the despair
    leaving her feet cold


  • misselaineous
    January 1, 2008
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    i hate being the first...
    but
    this is simply awesome

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