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My America / Pissin' Pedro

My America

I was thinkin' about my country
when I boarded that big plane.
I turned around and I saw beauty
as far I could see.

I am proud to be going
to help fight to keep her free.
That's the reason that I'm on my way
That's what she expects of me.


Said I'd be comin back soon
and get down on my knees.
I'll kiss the soil I'm standin on,
This land of the brave and free.

My America
My America
God gave this land to me.
My America
My America
Where I'm blessed and I'm still free.


There were many close calls
every where I turned.
I seemed to avoid it all,
but this one time I learned,
I won't be coming home.
The Lord said He needed me
and the reason for my bein' gone
only you will see

So if I had the chance to ask you
to do  one thing for me.
Stand up tall, walk outside
and kiss the soil for me.

My America
My America
God gave this land to me
My America
My America
where I'm blessed and I'm still free.

Thank God for America
I can be what I wanna' be
In America
My America
for you and me

My america
My america
God gave this land to me
My America
My America
where I'm blessed
and I'm still free





Author notes:
Written December 4th, 2004











Pissing Pedro ...born again?

a few years ago, we had a Chihuahua
his name was Pedro
no matter how I tried
I could not potty train him!

so we nicknamed him...

...Pissin' Pedro!

if there was a spot in the house
he didn't pee on
I couldn't find it....

.....except one place


one day I returned from work
to find
Pedro had climbed on top
of the kitchen table....

that wasn't all..

he peed right in the middle of

my Bible!

Now, if you ask me
I think that was an Omen

I don't know though...
... you tell me

you see, a few weeks later...

Pissin' Pedro came up missing...

...on Christmas Day!


We looked the neighborhood and everywhere we could think of...

...but no Pedro!



well I've heard different versions
of what might have happened to dear old Pedro

Some say, he sealed his own fate, the day he peed on the Bible


but others say...

He got raptured ..


or maybe he went to a third-world country

and spent his life as a missionary...



but to tell you the truth..


I'm just happy the house doesn't smell like pee anymore!!

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    Good both of them were good but I truly loved the one about My America

    Very good work here and I dont have pissin pedro thats for sure .My little chiwawa was trained on puppy pads
    I will have to give aplauds later for my points I have left has to go to a contest I have on right now


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      January 12, 2008
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      oh I got Pedro when he was 2yrs old! My son found him and brought him home to mate with my female and he never got a chance to mate lol!!!

      But he shouldn't have peed on my Bible! I'm thinking it got God a little mad

      Mary


  • natchstucco
    January 7, 2008

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    #1 aint for me as I am not one for patriotic rhyme no matter my country or yours. as for Pedro...hah the dog got his. Oh what do they call it. Karma. yes. it even happens to animals.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 3, 2008

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    lol omg....the last poem is too funny.... translated...lololllllllllllllllllllllllll

    Both poems show you do love poetry writing..never mind America... and it is great to see both patriotic and pure joy at writing show through your work.


  • Ithica silver member
    January 3, 2008

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    These are wonderful! And well rounded too... Patriotism and bawdy humor! Though some do fail to see a difference between the two...?


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    January 2, 2008

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    Poem # 1 was a very touching

    lyrical song...you could hear the beauty of the words
    in it. I don't think we could ever be reminded enough
    of just how wonderful it is that we get to live in such
    a land of free called America.

    Poem #2 just made us all laugh and go oh no...perhaps
    Santa took Pedro to his north pole!
    You have heard of "yellow snow" right?
    giggle.

    good job dear poet, good job!
    fun heart and soul in you!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : ))

    • SilverButterfly gold member
      January 4, 2008
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      Kathleen thank you so much for your nice comment! and yes I have heard of "yellow snow" lol. you're so funny girl!!!

      GBY
      SilverButterfly

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