I can not love you
for like burn of sun,
prick of rose,
you wound me.
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A contest entry
- p.s by Naridill.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ty gf
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Very intriguing. Love the play on words
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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ty dwelling for the gold
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Short, sweet and with a powerful punch.
Soulful Woman
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happy new beginnings gf. Much love.
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