Kiss me my darling
Never let me go
I will always be yours
To have and to hold
Kiss me my darling
With your lips so full and red
Let me fill the love you have
Let our hearts both be fed
Kiss me my darling
With your lips of honey and clover
Let the fullnes of your lips
Just thrill me over and over
Your lips are wide and warm
Their fullness give pleasure to me
They are shaped liked a M with a dash
When you fill me with kisses so free
Your lips are red and full
They are shaped so perfectly
Place them on top of mine
Fill me with ecstacy
kiss me my darling
One more time before we part
Your kiss will always be
The key that unlocks my heart
Author notes
#6 Your lover's lips
A contest entry
- 133rd Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended January 3, 2008, 8 entries
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Well... honestly I have mixed feelings about this... while I loved how passionate and wonderful this is... I do think it's missing something... I think it's imagery... I would like to be able to picture this person's lips you know? Add a little more detailed word choice about her/his lips.
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