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What You Did

You said I am your darling
Never questioning your motives 
You held my heart in your hands

I said “Forever
You say “And ever” 
I’ll spend my end holding your hands

What made you go to such lengths?
To cloak the truth
I loved you, no matter what
I uncovered you didn’t trust me
The stranger knew more about you 

My heart is now torn in two
Your soft words are like poison
I rather choke on your lies
Than shed one tear because of you

I now say “Never and ever”
To all emotion

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Prompt- I rather choke on your lies than shed one tear because of you

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  • DarkestAngel68
    January 1, 2008

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    I can so relate

    I havedefinately been here done this.I can so relate to this poem I very much enjoyed reading it. Excellent work.