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Renewal

Once a year we face the clock with sternest stare

focused on those hands pointing

towards twelve on New Year's Eve.

 

Mind falls into the swirling vortex

swimming with recollection's swells,

words flow in memory's voice

as we stand at another year's crossroad.

 

Grabbing the mirror of our lives,

to gaze in retrospective reflection

and ask the most stabbing poignant question,

did we pass beyond our limitations?

 

One is the number for starting over,

first day of a New Year.

How the calendar pages are written

we can not say for sure,

but it gives a chance to see

a chalkboard in the hours waiting

for writing our future in hope,

holding onto the eraser

that we might wipe away

scribbles from our past mistakes,

making room for new dreams,

in prayer and vow,

tomorrow is a place to walk

with anticipation's footsteps

strolling past the shadows

of our regrets.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 5, 2008

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    wow this is an intriging and powerfufl write which is truly inspring and beautifully penned. wel done and best of luck


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 1, 2008

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    Excellent Write Dear You have penned a great description of the beginning of a new year. I wish you the best of luck in the contest Cara


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 1, 2008

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    Well done, my friend!
    A most excellent write from your talented pen!
    All the best to you in the contest!

  • Virginia Logsdon
    January 1, 2008

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    Cool!

    You didn a great job in writing this!This is truely a great desription of the fresh start we cam begin after New Years day!{Or anytime we wnt to.}

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 1, 2008
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    Forgot your clapies

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    I like this alot
    tomorrow is a place to walk
    with anticipation's footsteps
    strolling past the shadows
    of our regrets

    Goodluck in this contest best wishes

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