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Hello&Goodbye-♥


The days gets dark and i miss you even more.
I love you and you don't even know it.


♥

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I know its not a poem, i just had to say it. Simple enough for whoever reads it to understand it, simple enough for me to say a whole lot of how i feel in a few words. I havent been on here in years so im not even going to attempt writing a poem about it.

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  • Commodore Rouge
    January 1, 2008

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    Yeah, it doesn't seem like a poem, but it's got emotions, and there's a start. Maybe you should write a little more, go into more detail, and it will be even more worth saying. Just a thought . . .